Thursday, November 6, 2008

Conan VS Tintin







VS








‘Good morning, Conan. Are you going out today?’ Ran asked.
‘Yes, I’m going for a walk. Why? Do you need me to do something for you?’ Conan replied.
‘Oh, I know you always nice to me, if Shinichi was here he would be doing this for me and I don’t need to ask you a favour. Can you please get me some soda? It’s so hot today, I want something refreshing today.’ Ran said.
‘Ok, no problem.’ ‘I will do anything for you, Miss Ran.’ Conan said. ‘Thank you so much Conan.’ Ran replied.
Just about time that Conan leaves the house, he is still at the front gate, the phone rings and Ran answers the phone because no one else is there. ‘Hi there, this is Mouri’s resident’ Ran answers the phone. Conan hears the phone ring so he was waiting to see if that phone call was for him.
‘We are looking for Mr. Kogorou, is he there?’ a man voice said.
‘Who is that? Who are you representing? Why do you want to talk to my father?’ Ran said angrily.
‘We are calling from the JNPA, what we do is very confidential, this is a very serious matter. We may let you know once Mr. Kogorou told us that you can be trusted.’ A man said.
‘What is JNPA stand for anyway? Mister. Ran puzzled.
‘JNPA stands for Japan National Police Agency. Have you ever seen the American movie with FBI? And my name is Jyuzou Megure, police inspector. If you could tell your father that I have called, it would be really helpful. This is my number (03) 3445 – 3181, please get your father to call me back. ‘Jyuzou said seriously. ‘Again, this is urgent!’
Ran wrote down the phone number of this Mazaki guy very quickly then said ‘thanks for calling, bye’ she looks out the window and sees Conan still stand there listening to her conversation on the phone with a stranger.
‘Conan, I know you still here. Why don’t you get going?’ Ran said again angrily.
Conan ran off the house with no hesitation. He became so alert because of Ran’s angriness. He slow down and continue walking once he reaches the busy road. Conan passes the Electronic shop, they have some big TVs and a giant TV on display and the news channel was on. ‘Priminister Taro Aso was kidnapped sometimes last week, it was a week ago that the Prime Minister was disappeared but JNPA and the secretary office have just come forward to tell the media that they have been looking for the Prime Minister, isn’t it going to be too late? Will they be able to save his life?’ Japan News said.
Conan rushes to the supermarket to buy some soda for Ran and rushes back home as he figures out about the strange call this morning that Ran talked with on the phone. He knows that the phone call was made from the government agency and definitely something serious happened. He gets home with the soda and he tries to look for Ran, but nobody is at home. The police car stops in front of the house, Conan greets them. The police men were in a hurry, they grab Conan’s both arms and lift him up and move him to the car. ‘Where are you taking me?’ Conan said.
‘We are taking you to the police station to see your friends’ the police man said.
They arrive at the police station as they said to Conan and he sees Kogorou and Ran there too. ‘Let me guess, all of you are here because of Prime Minister disappearance?’ Conan guessed.
‘How do you know, Conan? Kogorou said.
‘I saw the news when I was going to the supermarket.’ Conan said.
‘Let’s go on in more details….the police officers at the Tokyo International Airport have seen two European looking men and a Japanese looking men at the Tokyo International Airport leaving to Belgium. We believed that these two European looking men used the Deutsch passport to travel and kidnapped the Prime Minister, whom was asked to put the mask on. We have captured their movements from the surveillance cameras in front of the washrooms’ entrance area that they all went inside the washroom and put on the masks and then go on for boarding for Belgium flight. We are now trying to contact a young Belgian reporter named ‘Tintin’, very smart and talented man to help us with these three men’s movements in Belgium. Here in Japan, we have Kogorou and Conan to help us track them down; we would like to know why they want to keep the Prime Minister.’ Jyuzou said



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Tintin receives the phone call from the JNPA and very keen to track these guys down for them. ‘What a surprised phone call from JNPA! We have to get this news before anyone. The Prime Minister of Japan had been kidnapped. This time we may have a chance to go to Japan if we can solve the case, Snowy! We have to see Professor Calculus right now; he might be able to give me some suggestions.’ Tintin said.
Knock. Knock! ‘Professor Calculus, are you at home? It’s me Tintin and Snowy.’ Tintin said.
Professor Calculus has got a hearing problem but Tintin knows that he always leave the door unlock. So Tintin had no choice but barge in. ‘hello, Professor….anyone home?’ Tintin said. As soon as he said that the professor sees him and got frighten. ‘Argh…a thief’ Professor said. Then he tends to hit Tintin with a stick. ‘Ruff, ruff.’ Snowy barks. The Professor knows right away they are friends.
‘Tintin, I’m sorry. I didn’t hear you came in.’ Professor said.
‘You always leave the front door unlock, do you think it’s safe?’ Tintin said.
‘It’s safe in this neighbourhood, nothing to worry about!’ Professor said. ‘Anyway, what brought you here today?’
‘I had a call from JNPA (Japan National Police Agency), the Japanese Prime Minister was kidnapped by the two European men and they travelled to Belgium for some reasons. I need to find out what are they doing here and why they bring the Prime Minister here?’ Tintin said.
‘Do you have the European men’s descriptions?’ Professor said.
‘Not with me but I can get them to send me the sketch from the VDO tape.’ Tintin said.
Professor advised Tintin to go to the Brussels Airport and Charleroi Brussels South Airport and get the VDO Tapes recording of the two European men and one Japanese man together and get the pictures sketched. At the same time Tintin calls to JNPA and asks them to send the sketch of the two men’s pictures and send them as soon as possible. He tries to find the taxi driver number 13 which the three men had gone home from the airport with.
‘Hi there, I’m looking for the taxi driver number 13. Did he come in today?’ Tintin asked.
‘No, he is not.’ Another driver said.
‘It’s ok I will come back another day.’ Tintin said.

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Back in Japan Kogorou, Ran and Conan all go to talk to the Prime Minister’s family, especially his wife. Kogorou interviews her about what are other businesses that Taro does apart from joining the Japanese parliament. She said that the Aso family owns a coal mining business as well but she may not think if her husband would have an enemy anywhere.
Kogorou thinks that the interview between them was not very helpful to the case. He stops interviewing and then tells everyone to go home.
Conan has something in his mind that he doesn’t share with anyone, later that day he asked Kogorou to drop him in front of the local library. ‘I just want to take a walk and breathe in the fresh air’ Conan said.
Conan goes into the library and do some research about the coal mining business which Aso family runs. He searches from the journals and finds that the mine has been opened for very long time before in the 40’s and there were more than 300 prisoners of war worked there for free. Conan finds this interesting fact and he thinks he will come back to read more tomorrow, he must walk back home before anyone questions him where he was.
Later that night, Kogorou receives a call from JNPA that the European man contacts the Aso family that they wanted the money 10 million Euro.



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Back in Belgium, Tintin has received the sketched of the two men pictures and they are matched to the pictures he has. He saw the VDO tapes and also there he heard the two men talking not in Belgiun language but in Deutsch language He has been to the library to search for the information about Aso’s business related to the European men. He finds the same fact as Conan. Tintin goes back to the airport. This time he finds taxi driver number 13.
‘I’m looking for taxi driver number 13, is he here today?’ Tintin said.
‘Yes, he is here. ‘Another man said.
‘Heyyyy, Captain Haddock. What are you doing here? You are the driver number 13? Tintin asked.
‘It’s been a long time, Tintin. Yes, it’s me. This is my part time job when I’m away from the water….hahaha. How can I help you?’ Captain said.
‘Can you remember sometimes last week, you picked up three men, two are believed to be Deutsch and one is Japanese.’ Tintin said.
‘Let me think…..Oh yes, they were acting very odd. The asian man seems very pale like he is sick or some sort!’ Captain said.
‘Do you remember, where did you drop them off?’ Tintin asked hurriedly.
‘Yes, I will take you there.’ Captain said.
‘Ok, hurry up. We need to save someone’s life.’ Tintin said.
Captain Haddock takes Tintin to the apartment where he drops those three men off, the apartment is three leveled. They stop the car there and keep an eye on the building for a while. Tintin let snowy out of the car and snowy sniffs something fishy. The fishy smell comes off the third level of the apartment. ‘ruff, ruff……’ Snowy said. One man came out to shout at snowy. ‘hey, shut the f@** up!’ the man sticks his head out the window.
‘That’s him, one of them.’ Captain Haddock said.
It’s almost lunch time so Tintin thinks that one of them might go to get some lunch and leave the other one with Aso. He calls the detectives Thomson and Thompson for back up. The detectives don’t take long time they hurriedly come to the apartment but Tintin asks him to wait in another corner. Twenty minutes later one of the man leaves the building as Tintin’s plan. Tintin and Captan rush to the building, they reach the second and another man leaves the third floor room. He shouts to his friend ‘hey, get me some ciggy too!’ right then Tintin rushes to the third floor and open the door, he sees Aso there got tied up with the rope. He unties Aso and helps him out of the room. The clumpsy detectives rush in the building and the door was so small for both of them to get in at the same time. ‘BANG!’ big crash…for the twin brothers. Captain Haddock finds a stick which lying around on the apartment floor and hit the Deutsch man with it. They all run off the building and help Aso alive. Tintin thanks all his friends for the help and tries to get Aso to eat normal again after he becomes so skinny.





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Tintin flies to Japan and of course accompany by snowy to guard Aso back home safely. Tintin accompany by snowy and Kogorou accompany by Conan, they solve the case and Conan invited everyone to sit in the dark room where Kogorou sit in the front seat faints, Conan wears the gadget and plays the slide of the Coal mining history. Aso family had forced two Deutsch prisoners of war to work in their mine and nobody in Deutsch land ever heard about them again. The two kidnappers were related to the prisoners of war, wanted to take revenge because their ancestors worked for Aso for free and it’s time for Aso to repay. So they decided to kidnap him and request 10 million Euro.
‘why did they take Aso to Belgium?’ Ran asked.
Tintin sees that Conan uses the gadget to speak for Kogorou so he take the gadget from Conan and answers Ran’s question.
‘They took Aso to Belgium so there will be no connection to the mine history and Belgium is next to Netherland. It’s easy for them to live in Belgium and to run away after they get the money.’ Tintin said. Align Center


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I hope you guys will enjoy my story. I couldn’t finish it with 1,200 words. Have a nice holiday.

Fanficiton--A Hidden Love









Daisy



――A Hidden Love






Introduction:



Heroine----Hye-young
Hero----Park Yi

The woman is Hye-young, a young Korean artist who paints portraits in the city square, while dreaming of one day holding a solo exhibition of her works. She is a stranger in this city, and Hye-young's only source of strength is the memory of her first love.
A man (Park Yi) with a cold soul who smells of gunpowder has loved Hye-young when he saw her for the first time.
Then she meets a new man - well, almost meets him. She never really sees his face, but after giving him a drawing of a daisy, he responds by having a pot of daisies delivered to her door every day.
The original ending of this movie is that the Heroine died in a shoot-out, because she tried to protect her hidden lover Park Yi who was in her heart all the time but she discovered her love at the end of her life. The original story is a tragedy that accompanying with a romantic love, but I try to transform its woeful ending into a happy and perfect finale of this romantic love between the hero and heroine.

Story:



It is autumn in Amsterdam. The story begins in a café…

The man looks at his watch and rushes out of the café after saying to the woman “I will be back soon, please waiting for me.”

The woman says to herself “From the first day I received a pot of daisies, I have got quite used to wait for everything.”

A moment later…

Yi is back to the café, and brings a pot of daisies to the woman. Because he knows she likes the daisy.

The woman knows Yi is falling in love with her, but she still waits for someone. So she tells him a story about her first love: “I have fallen in love with someone, although I have never met him before. He has built a beautiful bridge for me and he gives me a pot of daisies as the most beautiful present everyday. He is the man who I am waiting for, and I will wait for him until the appearance of him. So I am happy to make friends with you.”

Yi keeps silence after she says. Yi knows Jeong Woo has been died, though she still loves him. “She makes a mistake, and she does not know that I am the only man who gives her a pot of daisies everyday, I am the only man who has built a bridge for her.” He says to himself in his heart, “but I can not tell her, because I am a killer, I do not want to hurt her, I do not want to destroy her beautiful love, and I do not want to kill our friendship any more.”

Hye-young looks at him, “If I can not fall in love with you, are you still glad to make friends with me?”
“Yes, if only can look at you at your side, I'd appreciate it.” Yi whispered the words to her.
“Thanks Yi, thank you for accompanying me all along.” Hye-young says to Yi with a appreciative voice.

After one year…

Jeong Woo had died for one year, and after he died, Park Yi always stays at Hye-young’s side not only to take care of her, but to amuse her happy every day.

Today is Jeong Woo’s death anniversary, so Hye-young goes to visit him with his boss. His boss tells her there is no progress of Woo’s case, but he can only make sure the killer liked classical music because the classical music was always playing in Woo’s car when he died, but he did not like classical music at all. Suddenly, Hye-young feels a little bit strange, but she can not give mouth to where the strange feeling is existent.

One hour later, Hye-young comes to Yi’s house, and she finds out that a classical music is playing in the radio, then she finds a gun, Woo’s picture and a newspaper on the date of Woo’s death in a secret place. She takes them to see Yi, and wants to listen to his explanation. However, Yi does not say anything to her, and just keeps silence.

Hye-young is heartstricken, and she cries and shouts so loudly, “Why? Why do you pretend to be innocent? Why don’t you tell me the truth? ” She says to him with a gun. But at this moment, Yi just repeats a sentence “you will know about all truths tomorrow”. (Because of the over-excited sentiment, after Yi’s saying, she has slipped off her chair on to the floor in a sudden faint.)

The next day, when she wakes up, she catches sight of a painting and a card on the table. This painting of daisy was painted by herself, and she has sent it to the man who built a bridge for her as a gift. “Why does this painting lie on my table?” She is wondering about that. Then she stands up immediately and comes near to the table.

“I am sorry, I have hidden so many truths to you, because the more truths you know, the more danger you get. From long ago, I have lived in a world that filling with death and violence. I should not come to so close to you at first, I am fool…Originally, I thought if I could hide the truth, I would protect you, but now I hurt you deeper than before…Hye-young, thank you for staying with you, thank you for so many happy time you bring to me, I will remember you forever. I return this painting of daisy to you although I like it so much, and I wish you can forget so much heartrending memories, wish you can find a man who is worthy to accept this painting and accept your love, and wish you have a happy life…Please trust me, I will be good in future. Goodbye my love…”

After reading these words, Hye-young is sure that she has found her lover, Yi is just the man who she has always waited for. Then she takes the painting to the garden which is filled with her beautiful memory of daisy, because she thinks about Yi will be wait for her in the daisy garden. However, she does not see anyone in the garden when she reaches there, at the moment an idea suddenly comes upon her that Yi must be on the square where they met each other for the first time. She runs to the square with carrying the daisy painting. When she arrives, she cries around the square and she believes Yi can look at her, he can know her…

She says loudly, “Please look at this painting, please look at me. I know you are here now, and I know what you are going to do next, please stop, please stop…” That’s right, Hye-young knows Yi is going to kill someone today, because she found the gun disappeared when she woke up this morning. She still cries, “I am sorry, I am sorry I have not recognized you for such a long time, but I know now, I know you are the only man who I am always waiting for…” At the same time, Park Yi is in a small room of a building on the square. (Because he intends to kill a man, then give himself a result with suicide.)Just liking what Hye-young guesses, he is so close to her. But he hesitates if he should put the gun down and appear in front of her.

At exactly that moment, because of her weakness and sadness, Hye-young has fell into a dead faint again. Seeing of that, Yi is running to her with throwing caution to the winds. He carries her in his arm and says sorry to her with his sincerely love, “I am sorry, dear, now I am here, I am here at your side, please wake up, please don’t scare me…” He is in tears over he has hurt his lover. “I am sorry because I hurt you, I am sorry because I could not rescue Jeong Woo when he was shotted by someone, I am sorry because I can not give you a beautiful love and happiness forever, I am sorry because I love you…”

Several days past…

In a ward, a pot of some fresh daisies is on the table, and Yi is at Hye-young’s side with happiness. At this moment, they are painting a new picture of the pot of daisies on the table…


Black Jack Fanfiction (sequel)



Next day, Pinoko and Black Jack go to Naomi’s house again in the early morning, but Pinoko is still sleepy. As soon as they arrive at her house, Pinoko shuts herself in the toilet and has another sleep.
“Hey! Pinoko! Wake up!” Black Jack strongly knocks on the door.
“Zzz…”
Just before noon, Pinoko finally wakes up, and they start the operation. When they have a look at Ken’s head, Pinoko finds a serious injury in his head.
“What’s this!?” Pinoko says to Black Jack.
“Somebody hit him” Black Jack says. “He was hit, and then he was burnt!”
“OHMIGEWDNESS!” Pinoko drops her surgical knife and draws back.
When they go home on that day, they stop by the house which is close to Naomi’s house.
“Excuse me, do you know about Ken and Naomi family?” Black Jack asks the neighbour.
“Yes. Ken used to be so violent and Naomi was always crying, but he’s disappeared suddenly. I heard he’s passed away. He had it coming.”
“Passed away!?” Pinoko and Black Jack say loudly. “But…,” Pinoko starts telling about Ken, but Black Jack stops her.
“OK, Thanks a lot. We’d better be going.” Black Jack says and they leave there.

“We need to finish his operation soon, Pinoko. It’s been six months already.” Black Jack says seriously.
“Yeah, I know. But I can’t stop wondering why Naomi keeps shutting Ken into the basement. Unless I know the fact, I don’t want to let Ken go.”
“Stop it, Pinoko! We just need to operate on him. You’re not a detective!”
“Shut up! I’m the doctor. You just assist me!”
While Pinoko and Black Jack are arguing, Ken is just listening to them.
“Maybe she was cheating on her boyfriend, and he thought she was dating Ken, so he tried to kill Ken. But he couldn’t kill, then…”
“Pinoko, you are too obsessive about soap operas.”

After a long postponement, because of Pinoko’s laziness, Ken’s operation is almost done. Pinoko gives a pen to Ken.
“Try to hold it.” Ken tries to move his fingers.
“Mo..v..in..g…” Ken is able to hold the pen and speak slowly.
“We attached an artificial tongue, so you’ll be able to speak properly if you practise.” Pinoko says to Ken.
“Thank you very much.” Naomi says.
While Pinoko is having a nap in the toilet as usual, Black Jack asks Naomi, “Why you wanted us to operate on him even though you tried to kill him once?”
“!” Naomi is surprised by Black Jack’s speech, but she calmly says “It’s none of your business. You just operate on him.”
“Yes, it’s none of my business, but when he recovers, he’ll be able to hold everything, such as a gun and a knife. And he’ll be able to kill you.”
“He was…so violent. I hit me every day. One day I couldn’t manage my emotion and I hit him by a vase.” Naomi starts sobbing. “He fell down. I thought he died, so I cried and cried. Then I put him into an incinerator to burn. But he didn’t die, he was just unconscious, so he came out in a mass of flames from the incinerator. I poured the water, but he didn’t look like a human. So, I hid him in the basement and looked for a capable doctor.”
“But he’ll soon recover and kill you. You should leave here right now!” Black Jack shouts.
“No! I don’t let you go, Naomi! You made me look like a monster. I don’t forgive you!” Ken suddenly appears. He has a knife in his hand.
“Go to hell!!” Ken stabs Naomi.
Black Jack runs to the toilet and makes Pinoko wake up. They get into the car quickly and leave there.
“What!? What happened!?” Pinoko asks Black Jack.
“Doctors can cure injuries, but they can’t erase malice from people’s mind.”






Did you enjoy? Thank you for reading. All kinds of comments are welcome :-)

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

The Incredibles Fanfiction


Bob Parr is a happy man. After living as a civilian for years, he is ecstatic to be able to put on the mask and costume again and relive his life as Mr. Incredible. Fighting crime, and the public adoration that comes with being a crime fighter, has made him feel 20 years younger. It has helped to strengthen his marriage with Helen, otherwise known as Elastigirl. Once reluctant to return to a life of fighting crime, Elastigirl now rejoins Mr. Incredible as the world’s most famous superhero couple. They are now joined in their crime fighting escapades by their daughter 14 year old daughter Violet, and their 9 year old son Dash. The icing on the cake for Bob is the discovery of their baby son Jack-Jack’s incredible powers. Yes, Bob Parr is a happy man. ‘Can it get any better than this?’ Bob often wondered.

Jack-Jack breaks into tears, waking up Bob and Helen.

“What’s wrong with that kid of yours?” grumbled Bob as Jack-Jack continued to cry and scream.

“Maybe he’s hungry Bob. Why don’t you go check?”

Bob reluctantly gets out of bed and walks towards Jack-Jack’s crib. “What’s the problem now kid?” Jack-Jack continues to cry as Bob hands him a milk bottle. He throws it back at Bob, screaming and kicking. “Honey I think you better deal with this one.”

Helen crawls out of bed and makes her way to the crib. “Okay settle down now, mummy’s here.” She reaches into the crib and picks the baby up.

“Rarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!” Jack-Jack lets out a loud growl and bursts into flames, forcing Helen to let go. “Jack-Jack! What’s gotten into you?” Jack-Jack lets out another roar, and transforms into a fire monster. He starts to run round the room, then crashes through the wall and runs away. Shocked, both Helen and Bob peered through the giant hole in the wall left by Jack-Jack, and watched as he zips round the neighbourhood screaming and growling, with flames emitting from his body.

“I’ll get him dad!” shouted Dash, who was outside the house and witnessed his little brother crashing through the bedroom. Dash chases after him, running at full capacity of his superhuman speed. He chases him through the busy streets, narrowly avoiding pedestrians and vehicles. But even with his superhuman speed, he failed to catch his brother who was surprisingly faster as him. He could only watch as Jack-Jack disappeared into the horizon.

Dash quickly returned to the house, only to find his parents and his sister Violet all dressed in their superhero costumes. Bob’s friend Lucius was also present, dressed in the costume of his alter ego Frozone.

“Sorry dad I couldn’t catch him. He was too fast for me?”

“Wow faster than you? Don’t worry Dash. Get into your costume; we can’t let anyone see you like this.”

“How are we supposed to find him?” Violet asked Helen.

“I don’t know sweetie. Something’s wrong with Jack-Jack. His power’s are out of control. And..”

“And there’s only one way to stop him my dear.” In walked Edna Mode, the brilliant scientist and famous designer of all their superhero costumes. “This has happened before.”

Bob was puzzled “What do you mean?”

“Your son has been blessed with extraordinary powers. In fact, your son’s powers are so rare and powerful that there have only been two other people who had similar powers that we know off.”

“But why is it going out of control?”

“No one is entirely sure why dear. It is said that when a fire demon like your son senses the presence of another one, he will be unable to control his powers and will be unable to turn back into a human unless one of them disappears. But there is another way..”
Edna pulls out a small test tube filled with bright blue liquid. “We always knew this might happen again. So we created this anecdote many years ago. One sip of this will strip your son of all his powers”

“Woman, are you mad!? No way would I take my son’s powers away from him! Over my dead..”

“Look dad!” shouted Dash, pointing towards the TV. “It’s Jack-Jack!”

The family looked in disbelief as they watched a live news report in the Morning News off Jack-Jack, covered in flames, running around the city centre and terrifying civilians.

“Oh boy that don’t look too god” Frozone deadpanned.

“Let’s get our Jack-Jack back! Incredibles away!!” Bob grabbed the test tube as the Incredibles with Frozone rushed out the door.

They arrived in the city, only to find it in chaos. People were running around in panic, some with their clothes on fire. Some were even running around with their hair set alight. There were burnt cars and broken trees, shattered windows and bent lampposts.

“There he is!” Elastigirl pointed to the top of a tall skyscraper. At the very top was Jack-Jack, in monster form, climbing. Elastigirl used her superpowers and stretched both arms towards Jack-Jack. But before she could get close to him, he shoots her outstretched hands with beams from his eyes.

“Don’t worry I’ll get him!” Frozone rushes to the top of the building only to be smacked down by Jack-Jack as sent crashing to the ground.

Bob looked on in horror. He had a decision to make. He could try grab his baby back, but it doesn’t appear to be working. His only option left was to use the anecdote. Taking his son’s powers away was one of the hardest thing he had to do. But he had no choice. And he had a plan.
He climbed towards Jack-Jack, who let out a growl as he approached nearer. He waves the test tube in front of Jack-Jack. “Look what daddy got for you Jack-Jack! Yummy! Come here boy.”

“Rarrrr!!!” Jack-Jack roared again, flames coming out his mouth.

“It’s okay boy. Daddy got a yummy treat for you…NOW!”

Suddenly Violet, who was invisible the whole time, appears behind Jack-Jack and grabs him. Bob then rushes to pour the anecdote into his wide open mouth. Jack-Jack reluctantly swallows, and then stays silent.

“Is it working, dad?

Frozone, who was knocked unconscious for a few minutes, rushed back towards them. “Don’t worry guys I’m coming!”

BOOM. Jack-Jack lets out a gigantic burp, releasing a giant mushroom cloud of flames that sends Frozone along with Bob and Violet flying through the air and crashing to the group.

Bob opens his eyes as the dust settled. He turns to his left to find Violet and Frozone lying on the ground next to him. “Is everyone alright?” He gets up and dusts himself “Jack-Jack!” He screamed in panic and rushes back to the building.

There he find Elastigirl, sitting on a park bench. In her arms was Jack-Jack, back in human form, and sound asleep.

“Everything’s alright honey…we got our Jack-Jack back.”

A week has passed since that crazy day and life was back to normal. Violet and Dash were away at school. Frozone was back out fighting crime. Bob sat in front of the TV as he looked back at the past events. It was a hard thing to do, taking Jack-Jack’s powers away from him. But he was happier about getting him back, and protecting his family. But he wondered about Edna’s words. She said that the only way for Jack-Jack to lose control of his powers is when he senses the presence of another fire demon like him. “But who can that be?” he thought to himself. “I don’t think there’s another one like him around.”

Helen walks into the room.

“Bob, I’ve got something to tell you.”

“Whats on your mind honey?”

Helen sat down next to him.

“I’m 4 weeks pregnant!”

Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Spirited Away 2: A ten years story Fanfiction (Final Draft)




Intro:
Characters:
Chihiro --- The famous fairy story writer
Nigihayami---Chihiro’s first lover
Tomohisa---A news reporter




Could we meet again in somewhere? Of course we will. “Just go now! Nigihayami! Remember that don’t turn back!” Chihiro said sadly and her face full of tears. She feels like falling down to a bottomless pit. Suddenly she wakes up; she opens her eyes slowly and winks her eyes several times. Yes, its just a dream. Just the same dream she has to have everyday.

Slim, soft, and pitch colour hair, an innocent and beautiful face which gets rid of childish and becomes full of maturity. Yes, this is Chihiro. Ten years are such a long time since she separated with Nigihayami.

Chimiro now is walking gentlest on her way to the new book officially sign meeting. She walks on the street as she‘s thinking something in her mind.

Since the last time I separated with you, it has been unconsciously past 10 years.

Chihiro has been from a slim, timidity little girl becomes into a famous Japanese fairy story writer.This book is her third one being published and also can be considered as the latest one as well. The story she wrote is something basing on her real childhood story. The one which happened in the fantasy world---the bathhouse 10 years ago.

This is spring now and extremely wet . Chihiro leaned her head and watches the sky with a sunshine smiling.This rainwater really seems like the wishes which Nigihayami sent from the other world.

Chihiro keeps walking and thinking until she arrives at her new book officially sign meeting. She puts her hand lightly on the chest and tries to have a deep breath.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, in what way make you write this famous fairy story?” asks by the news reporter who is holding the microphone and he puts the microphone in front of Chihiro.

“Because of a magical, beautiful and unforgettable real story in my childhood.” She answered slowly, and gentle with a charming smile.

“Ms Chihiro, would you like to cooperate with our神奈川 Film Company? We are really expecting that to produce your book adapt into a fairy movie.” A very handsome man is getting into the crowed reporters and passing his name card to Chihiro .

A short silence ensued, that handsome man looks quite similar with the one who is always in her memory, the one who can deeply catches her heart.

“I will think about that. If you don’t mind, would you come with me for a coffee in the Kakashi coffee shop?” She asked.

“Wow that sounds nice, so see you around 8.” The man with a sweet smile and answered.

Chihiro stands in front of the Kakashi coffee shop when it is 8 o’clock.This is her favourite coffee shop. Because this coffee shop always causes her memories in the past.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, what are you thinking now?” A gentle voice comes to her ears. The man who is called Tomohisa.

“Oh...I’m sorry, I didn’t recognized you are coming. Mr Tomohisa.” She answered and her beautiful face suddenly turns red like an apple.

“So…mmm… Why we are still standing ourside the coffee shop? Let’s get into the shop and make ourselves comfortable. Ok?” Tomohisa suggested.

Chihiro laughed and followed him, walked into the shop.

“To be honest, you look really stunning today with this beautiful evening dress.” Tomohisa stands at back of her and said.

And then she feels kind of breathless. Because that juvenile from 10 years before said the same words. She remembered that’s such a beautiful sunshine morning, nearby the garden, that juvenile said to her: “Chihiro, you look really beautiful when you are wearing the red dress.” And then, she smiles naturally to the juvenile. Just like this, she easily started to like his smiling. That juvenile, the one who is Worthing to put her whole life into...

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, I think you...” The voice from Tomohisa which arouses Chihiro get back from her sweet memories.

“I’m sorry.” Her face starts to turn red again and it’s the second time.“I don’t want to talk about the movie things today, I don’t feel well.” She said. At this moment, she feels extremely cold, “So sorry about that I date you out today. But I really don’t want to chat today.”

“ Ms Chihiro. It doesn’t matter…” Suddenly that, he stops talking because he recognises that her beautiful face full of the tears.She’s such a so emotional girl; something just lightly touches her deep heart and makes her want to cry.

“I give you a lift to go home.” He said extremely gentle and stares her eyes like the stars from the night sky.

“All right…” She answered and submissively followed him get into the car.

He parked the car in front of a daily shop.“Ms Chihiro, you haven’t eaten anything tonight and must be hungry. I’m gonna buy you some food.” And then he gets out of the car and directly walks to the daily shop.When he comes back, he recognises that Chihiro is gazing at him with gentle and innocent eyes.

“You look really similar with him, not only the appearance.”

He passed the bread to her and surprisely asked: “You mean I look like whom?"

“You look like the man inside my heart, quite similar.” She answered.How similar is that! She starts to get down to her memories again.

“So…Ms Chihiro, would you like to give me a chance to walk into your heart and repel all your sorrow memories.” He gazes at her face with pure hearted eyes.

She suddenly getting frightened and mutter a few words, asked that: “why?"

“ Because you are such a special girl, when I first time I met you, I know that you are the one I should guard and protect during my whole life.” Tomohisa answered.

Couples of minites later, Chihiro has gone home and standing at the backyard of her house, she’s gazing at Tomohisa’s car has driving away. She feels extremely helpless and got nothing to do.She feels so tired and cold. And then she takes a quick shower and goes to bed. But it’s really hard that she can’t go to sleep. She starts to think that she shouldn’t stand in the old memories any more. They are all passed away. The past memories only can cause her feel sorrow and sadness. The only one thing she should learn is to abandon and forgetting. She deserves to live happily and enjoyable. Nigihayami from the other world should be happy to see that. Her new life has been started at this moment.

Her eyes are suddenly getting so shining because she realizes that there is one necessary thing she has to do in order to be not regret in her whole life. So she quickly checks the clock, its 2 am in the morning; so she straights out and gives a phone call to Tomohisa.

“Hi, it’s me...mmm... just wondering that would you like to go out for a cup of coffee.”

“Yes, why not! I’m coming to pick you up! Please wait for me!”He answered with extremely excited voice and quickly run out of the house.”

At the same time, Chihiro dresses her favourite red everning dress and looks at the mirror with an enchanting smile...

Monday, November 3, 2008

Spirited Away 2: A ten years story Fanfiction





Intro:

Could we meet again in somewhere? Of course we will. “Just go now! Nigihayami! Remember that don’t turn back!” Chihiro said sadly and her face full of tears.

Slim, soft, smooth and pitch color hair, an innocent and beautiful face which gets rid of childish and became full of maturity. Yes, this is Chihiro. Ten years are such a long time since she separated with Nigihayami.

Chimiro walks gentlest on her way to the new book officially sign meeting. She always thinks that.

It’s already 10 years.

Since the last time I separated with you, it has been unconsciously past 10 years.

Chihiro has been from a slim, timidity little girl becomes the most famous Japanese fairy story writer.

This book is her third one and also can be considered as the latest one as well. The story she wrote is something about her childhood story. The one which happened in the fantasy world---the bathhouse 10 years ago.

This is spring now and extremely wet as the god from the heaven always crying. Chihiro leaned her head and watches the sky with a sunshine smiling.

This rainwater really looks like the wishes which Nigihayami sent from the other world.

Chihiro keeps walking and thinking until she arrives at her new book officially sign meeting. She puts her hand lightly on the chest.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, in what way make you write this famous fairy story?” asks by the new reporter who is holding the microphone and he puts the microphone in front of Chihiro.

“Because of a magical, beautiful and unforgettable real story in my childhood.” She answers slowly, and gentle with a charming smile.

“Ms Chihiro, would you like to cooperate with our神奈川 Film Company? We are really expected that make your book adapt into a fairy movie.” A very handsome man is getting into the crowed reporters and passing Chihiro his name card.

A short silence ensued, that handsome man looks quite like the one who is always in her memory, the one who deeply catches her heart.

“I will think about that. If you don’t mind, would you come with me for a coffee in the Kakashi coffee shop?” She asks.

“Wow that sounds nice, so see you around 8.” The man with a sweet smile and answered.

Chihiro stands in front of the Kakashi coffee shop when it is 8 o’clock.

This is her favourite coffee shop. Because in here always got something which cause her memories.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, what are you thinking now?” A gentle voice comes to her ears. That’s that man called Tomohisa

“Oh…I’m sorry, I didn’t recognized you are coming. Mr Tomohisa.” She answered and her beautiful face suddenly turns into red like an apple.

“so…mmm… Why we are still standing ourside the coffee? Let’s go into the shop and make ourselves comfortable. Ok?” Tomohisa said.

Chihiro laughed and walked into the shop.

“ To be honest, u r really stunning today with this beautiful evening dress.” Tomohisa stands at back of her and said.

And then she feels kind of breathless. Because that juvenile from 10 years before said the same words. She remembered that that’s such a beautiful sunshine morning nearby the garden, that juvenile said to her: “Chihiro, you look really beautiful when you are wearing the red dress.” And then, she smiles naturally to the juvenile. Just like this, she easily started to like his smiling. That juvenile, the one who is Worthing to put her whole life to.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, I think you…” The voice from Tomohisa helps her get back from her sweet memories.

“I’m sorry.” Her face starts to turn red again and it’s the second time.

“I don’t want to talk about the movie things today, I don’t feel well.” She said. At this moment, she feels extremely cold, “So sorry about that date you out today. But I really don’t want to talk today.”

“ Ms Chihiro. It doesn’t matter…” Suddenly that, he stops talking.

He recognises that her beautiful face full of the tears.

She’s a so emotional girl , something just lightly touch her deep heart, and she would cry.

“I give you a lift to home.” He said extremely gentle and stares her eyes like the stars from the night sky.
“All right…” She answered and submissively followed him get into the car.

He parked the car in front of a daily shop.

“Ms Chihiro, you haven’t eaten anything tonight and must be hungry. I’m gonna buy you some food.” And then he gets out of the car and directly walk to the daily shop.

When he comes back, he recognises that Chihiro is gazing at him with gentle and innocent eyes.

“You are really looks like him, not only the appearance.”

He passed the bread to her and asked: “ You mean I look like whom?

“You look like the man inside my heart, quite similar.” She answered.

How similar is that! She starts to get down to her memories again.

“ So…Ms Chihiro, would you like to give me a chance, let me walk into your heart and repel your sorrow memories.” He gazes at her face with pure hearted eyes.

She suddenly getting frightened and mutter a few words and asked that: “why?’

“ Because you are such a special girl, when I first time I met you, I know that you are the one I should guard during my whole life.” Tomohisa said.

Standing at her backyard of her house, she’s gazing at Tomohisa’s car driving away. She feels extremely helpless and got nothing to do.

She feels so tired and cold. And then she takes a quick shower and goes to bed. But it’s really hard that she can’t go to sleep. She starts to think that she shouldn’t stand in the old memories any more. They are all passed away. The past memories only can cause her sorrow and sadness. The only one thing she should learn is to abandon and forgetting. She should live happily and enjoyable and Nigihayami from the other world should be happy to see that. Her new life has been started.

Her eyes suddenly getting so shining, she quickly check the clock, it’s 2 am in the morning, therefore, she straights out and open the cell phone and call Tomohisa. “Hi,it’s me…mmm… just wondering that would you like go out for a cup of coffee.” “ Yes, why not! I’m coming to pick you up! Please wait for me!”He Answered with extremely excited voice and quickly run out of the house.” She dressed her red evening dress again and looked at the mirror with a beautiful smile…


Black Jack Fanfiction

Black Jack and Pinoko live on the outskirts of a city. There are not many houses around their house. When they are having breakfast in a quiet morning, they receive a letter from a woman whose name is Naomi. The letter says “I would like you to see a person. He has a serious illness. Many doctors have tried to cure his illness, but nobody has cured. I heard about your reputation as a capable doctor, and I believe that only you can cure his illness. Please come and see him”. Black Jack and Pinoko have a foreboding that they are going to be involved in a trouble, yet they decide to see him.



Naomi and the person live in a village in the heart of the mountains. Black Jack and Pinoko go there by car. When they arrive there, they are surprised because their house is a mansion. They get out of the car and look around the house. There is a big garden and the grass is perfectly mowed. The exterior of the house is contemporary. They stop at the door and knock. A beautiful woman comes out and says “Hello. You’re Dr. Pinoko and Black Jack, aren’t you? Please come in”. Black Jack and Pinoko enter the house. The inside of the house is also gorgeous. Black Jack wonders why they live in such a location even though they definitely have enough money to live in the city, much more convenient place to live.
“Thank you for coming. My name is Naomi. I sent you the letter.”
“I’m Pinoko and he is Black Jack. Your house is very big. You’re the owner?”
“Uh…, yes…why don’t you have a seat, I’ll make you some tea.”
“No, thanks,” Black Jack suddenly says. “I want to see him. Where’s he?”
Pinoko does not want to work, so she looks at Black Jack with wistful eyes.
“Sure, follow me, please.” Naomi leads Black Jack and Pinoko to the basement.
They descend the stairs. It is dark and creepy. Pinoko wants to go home.

There is a door in the end of the stairs. “Here he is.” Naomi opens the door.
“This is him!?” Black Jack and Pinoko are frightened. They see a person who looks like a monster – all his skin festers, one of his eyelids sticks to his cheek’s skin, his nose is almost gone, he has no eyebrows and no eyelashes, and he cannot speak properly.
“Those are serious burned scars.” Black Jack says.
“He is my brother.” Naomi says. “He accidentally burned his entire body three years ago, and he became like this…”
“Has he seen a doctor?”
“Yes, but no doctor has been able to make him return to a normal condition. I heard you are the best doctor in the world, so…”
“It depends how much you can pay.” Pinoko says.
“How much will that be?”
“2.5 million dollars.” Pinoko says with a grin.
“Sure. I will deposit the money into your account.”
Naomi grabs her jacket and drives up to the bank.
Black Jack also grabs his white coat and says “Okay, Pinoko, let’s down to business.”
However, Pinoko does not want to operate on Ken, Naomi’s brother, because she is afraid of him.
“Well, I need to have a shower first, then I need to have a nap a little bit, and then…”
“Don’t be stupid! We’ll operate on him right now!” Black Jack shouts.
“Oookaaaaay…” Pinoko murmurs, but she grabs her white coat as well.
They make Ken lie down on the bed and start operating, looking at Ken’s ordinary face’s picture as a guide. Pinoko sometimes goes to the toilet to have a break during the operation.
“We will go home tonight. See you tomorrow morning.” After a long surgery, Black Jack says to Naomi and they leave her house.
“What do you think of them? I think they’re not normal brother and sister.” While Pinoko and Black Jack are driving home, Pinoko asks Black Jack.
“Yeah, there is a secret between them. He’s lost his tongue, so he can’t talk. He can’t hold a pen, so he can’t write either. No one can know inside of him.”
“What a pity.”
“The thing is, why she’s shut him into the basement for three years.”
“Strange family. I don’t want to go there again.” Pinoko tries to make a reason for quitting this operation.
“No, we’ll complete the operation no matter what happens!” Black Jack insists.
“Boo.”
I will post the rest of the story soon.
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