Wednesday, November 5, 2008

The Incredibles Fanfiction


Bob Parr is a happy man. After living as a civilian for years, he is ecstatic to be able to put on the mask and costume again and relive his life as Mr. Incredible. Fighting crime, and the public adoration that comes with being a crime fighter, has made him feel 20 years younger. It has helped to strengthen his marriage with Helen, otherwise known as Elastigirl. Once reluctant to return to a life of fighting crime, Elastigirl now rejoins Mr. Incredible as the world’s most famous superhero couple. They are now joined in their crime fighting escapades by their daughter 14 year old daughter Violet, and their 9 year old son Dash. The icing on the cake for Bob is the discovery of their baby son Jack-Jack’s incredible powers. Yes, Bob Parr is a happy man. ‘Can it get any better than this?’ Bob often wondered.

Jack-Jack breaks into tears, waking up Bob and Helen.

“What’s wrong with that kid of yours?” grumbled Bob as Jack-Jack continued to cry and scream.

“Maybe he’s hungry Bob. Why don’t you go check?”

Bob reluctantly gets out of bed and walks towards Jack-Jack’s crib. “What’s the problem now kid?” Jack-Jack continues to cry as Bob hands him a milk bottle. He throws it back at Bob, screaming and kicking. “Honey I think you better deal with this one.”

Helen crawls out of bed and makes her way to the crib. “Okay settle down now, mummy’s here.” She reaches into the crib and picks the baby up.

“Rarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!” Jack-Jack lets out a loud growl and bursts into flames, forcing Helen to let go. “Jack-Jack! What’s gotten into you?” Jack-Jack lets out another roar, and transforms into a fire monster. He starts to run round the room, then crashes through the wall and runs away. Shocked, both Helen and Bob peered through the giant hole in the wall left by Jack-Jack, and watched as he zips round the neighbourhood screaming and growling, with flames emitting from his body.

“I’ll get him dad!” shouted Dash, who was outside the house and witnessed his little brother crashing through the bedroom. Dash chases after him, running at full capacity of his superhuman speed. He chases him through the busy streets, narrowly avoiding pedestrians and vehicles. But even with his superhuman speed, he failed to catch his brother who was surprisingly faster as him. He could only watch as Jack-Jack disappeared into the horizon.

Dash quickly returned to the house, only to find his parents and his sister Violet all dressed in their superhero costumes. Bob’s friend Lucius was also present, dressed in the costume of his alter ego Frozone.

“Sorry dad I couldn’t catch him. He was too fast for me?”

“Wow faster than you? Don’t worry Dash. Get into your costume; we can’t let anyone see you like this.”

“How are we supposed to find him?” Violet asked Helen.

“I don’t know sweetie. Something’s wrong with Jack-Jack. His power’s are out of control. And..”

“And there’s only one way to stop him my dear.” In walked Edna Mode, the brilliant scientist and famous designer of all their superhero costumes. “This has happened before.”

Bob was puzzled “What do you mean?”

“Your son has been blessed with extraordinary powers. In fact, your son’s powers are so rare and powerful that there have only been two other people who had similar powers that we know off.”

“But why is it going out of control?”

“No one is entirely sure why dear. It is said that when a fire demon like your son senses the presence of another one, he will be unable to control his powers and will be unable to turn back into a human unless one of them disappears. But there is another way..”
Edna pulls out a small test tube filled with bright blue liquid. “We always knew this might happen again. So we created this anecdote many years ago. One sip of this will strip your son of all his powers”

“Woman, are you mad!? No way would I take my son’s powers away from him! Over my dead..”

“Look dad!” shouted Dash, pointing towards the TV. “It’s Jack-Jack!”

The family looked in disbelief as they watched a live news report in the Morning News off Jack-Jack, covered in flames, running around the city centre and terrifying civilians.

“Oh boy that don’t look too god” Frozone deadpanned.

“Let’s get our Jack-Jack back! Incredibles away!!” Bob grabbed the test tube as the Incredibles with Frozone rushed out the door.

They arrived in the city, only to find it in chaos. People were running around in panic, some with their clothes on fire. Some were even running around with their hair set alight. There were burnt cars and broken trees, shattered windows and bent lampposts.

“There he is!” Elastigirl pointed to the top of a tall skyscraper. At the very top was Jack-Jack, in monster form, climbing. Elastigirl used her superpowers and stretched both arms towards Jack-Jack. But before she could get close to him, he shoots her outstretched hands with beams from his eyes.

“Don’t worry I’ll get him!” Frozone rushes to the top of the building only to be smacked down by Jack-Jack as sent crashing to the ground.

Bob looked on in horror. He had a decision to make. He could try grab his baby back, but it doesn’t appear to be working. His only option left was to use the anecdote. Taking his son’s powers away was one of the hardest thing he had to do. But he had no choice. And he had a plan.
He climbed towards Jack-Jack, who let out a growl as he approached nearer. He waves the test tube in front of Jack-Jack. “Look what daddy got for you Jack-Jack! Yummy! Come here boy.”

“Rarrrr!!!” Jack-Jack roared again, flames coming out his mouth.

“It’s okay boy. Daddy got a yummy treat for you…NOW!”

Suddenly Violet, who was invisible the whole time, appears behind Jack-Jack and grabs him. Bob then rushes to pour the anecdote into his wide open mouth. Jack-Jack reluctantly swallows, and then stays silent.

“Is it working, dad?

Frozone, who was knocked unconscious for a few minutes, rushed back towards them. “Don’t worry guys I’m coming!”

BOOM. Jack-Jack lets out a gigantic burp, releasing a giant mushroom cloud of flames that sends Frozone along with Bob and Violet flying through the air and crashing to the group.

Bob opens his eyes as the dust settled. He turns to his left to find Violet and Frozone lying on the ground next to him. “Is everyone alright?” He gets up and dusts himself “Jack-Jack!” He screamed in panic and rushes back to the building.

There he find Elastigirl, sitting on a park bench. In her arms was Jack-Jack, back in human form, and sound asleep.

“Everything’s alright honey…we got our Jack-Jack back.”

A week has passed since that crazy day and life was back to normal. Violet and Dash were away at school. Frozone was back out fighting crime. Bob sat in front of the TV as he looked back at the past events. It was a hard thing to do, taking Jack-Jack’s powers away from him. But he was happier about getting him back, and protecting his family. But he wondered about Edna’s words. She said that the only way for Jack-Jack to lose control of his powers is when he senses the presence of another fire demon like him. “But who can that be?” he thought to himself. “I don’t think there’s another one like him around.”

Helen walks into the room.

“Bob, I’ve got something to tell you.”

“Whats on your mind honey?”

Helen sat down next to him.

“I’m 4 weeks pregnant!”

Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Spirited Away 2: A ten years story Fanfiction (Final Draft)




Intro:
Characters:
Chihiro --- The famous fairy story writer
Nigihayami---Chihiro’s first lover
Tomohisa---A news reporter




Could we meet again in somewhere? Of course we will. “Just go now! Nigihayami! Remember that don’t turn back!” Chihiro said sadly and her face full of tears. She feels like falling down to a bottomless pit. Suddenly she wakes up; she opens her eyes slowly and winks her eyes several times. Yes, its just a dream. Just the same dream she has to have everyday.

Slim, soft, and pitch colour hair, an innocent and beautiful face which gets rid of childish and becomes full of maturity. Yes, this is Chihiro. Ten years are such a long time since she separated with Nigihayami.

Chimiro now is walking gentlest on her way to the new book officially sign meeting. She walks on the street as she‘s thinking something in her mind.

Since the last time I separated with you, it has been unconsciously past 10 years.

Chihiro has been from a slim, timidity little girl becomes into a famous Japanese fairy story writer.This book is her third one being published and also can be considered as the latest one as well. The story she wrote is something basing on her real childhood story. The one which happened in the fantasy world---the bathhouse 10 years ago.

This is spring now and extremely wet . Chihiro leaned her head and watches the sky with a sunshine smiling.This rainwater really seems like the wishes which Nigihayami sent from the other world.

Chihiro keeps walking and thinking until she arrives at her new book officially sign meeting. She puts her hand lightly on the chest and tries to have a deep breath.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, in what way make you write this famous fairy story?” asks by the news reporter who is holding the microphone and he puts the microphone in front of Chihiro.

“Because of a magical, beautiful and unforgettable real story in my childhood.” She answered slowly, and gentle with a charming smile.

“Ms Chihiro, would you like to cooperate with our神奈川 Film Company? We are really expecting that to produce your book adapt into a fairy movie.” A very handsome man is getting into the crowed reporters and passing his name card to Chihiro .

A short silence ensued, that handsome man looks quite similar with the one who is always in her memory, the one who can deeply catches her heart.

“I will think about that. If you don’t mind, would you come with me for a coffee in the Kakashi coffee shop?” She asked.

“Wow that sounds nice, so see you around 8.” The man with a sweet smile and answered.

Chihiro stands in front of the Kakashi coffee shop when it is 8 o’clock.This is her favourite coffee shop. Because this coffee shop always causes her memories in the past.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, what are you thinking now?” A gentle voice comes to her ears. The man who is called Tomohisa.

“Oh...I’m sorry, I didn’t recognized you are coming. Mr Tomohisa.” She answered and her beautiful face suddenly turns red like an apple.

“So…mmm… Why we are still standing ourside the coffee shop? Let’s get into the shop and make ourselves comfortable. Ok?” Tomohisa suggested.

Chihiro laughed and followed him, walked into the shop.

“To be honest, you look really stunning today with this beautiful evening dress.” Tomohisa stands at back of her and said.

And then she feels kind of breathless. Because that juvenile from 10 years before said the same words. She remembered that’s such a beautiful sunshine morning, nearby the garden, that juvenile said to her: “Chihiro, you look really beautiful when you are wearing the red dress.” And then, she smiles naturally to the juvenile. Just like this, she easily started to like his smiling. That juvenile, the one who is Worthing to put her whole life into...

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, I think you...” The voice from Tomohisa which arouses Chihiro get back from her sweet memories.

“I’m sorry.” Her face starts to turn red again and it’s the second time.“I don’t want to talk about the movie things today, I don’t feel well.” She said. At this moment, she feels extremely cold, “So sorry about that I date you out today. But I really don’t want to chat today.”

“ Ms Chihiro. It doesn’t matter…” Suddenly that, he stops talking because he recognises that her beautiful face full of the tears.She’s such a so emotional girl; something just lightly touches her deep heart and makes her want to cry.

“I give you a lift to go home.” He said extremely gentle and stares her eyes like the stars from the night sky.

“All right…” She answered and submissively followed him get into the car.

He parked the car in front of a daily shop.“Ms Chihiro, you haven’t eaten anything tonight and must be hungry. I’m gonna buy you some food.” And then he gets out of the car and directly walks to the daily shop.When he comes back, he recognises that Chihiro is gazing at him with gentle and innocent eyes.

“You look really similar with him, not only the appearance.”

He passed the bread to her and surprisely asked: “You mean I look like whom?"

“You look like the man inside my heart, quite similar.” She answered.How similar is that! She starts to get down to her memories again.

“So…Ms Chihiro, would you like to give me a chance to walk into your heart and repel all your sorrow memories.” He gazes at her face with pure hearted eyes.

She suddenly getting frightened and mutter a few words, asked that: “why?"

“ Because you are such a special girl, when I first time I met you, I know that you are the one I should guard and protect during my whole life.” Tomohisa answered.

Couples of minites later, Chihiro has gone home and standing at the backyard of her house, she’s gazing at Tomohisa’s car has driving away. She feels extremely helpless and got nothing to do.She feels so tired and cold. And then she takes a quick shower and goes to bed. But it’s really hard that she can’t go to sleep. She starts to think that she shouldn’t stand in the old memories any more. They are all passed away. The past memories only can cause her feel sorrow and sadness. The only one thing she should learn is to abandon and forgetting. She deserves to live happily and enjoyable. Nigihayami from the other world should be happy to see that. Her new life has been started at this moment.

Her eyes are suddenly getting so shining because she realizes that there is one necessary thing she has to do in order to be not regret in her whole life. So she quickly checks the clock, its 2 am in the morning; so she straights out and gives a phone call to Tomohisa.

“Hi, it’s me...mmm... just wondering that would you like to go out for a cup of coffee.”

“Yes, why not! I’m coming to pick you up! Please wait for me!”He answered with extremely excited voice and quickly run out of the house.”

At the same time, Chihiro dresses her favourite red everning dress and looks at the mirror with an enchanting smile...

Monday, November 3, 2008

Spirited Away 2: A ten years story Fanfiction





Intro:

Could we meet again in somewhere? Of course we will. “Just go now! Nigihayami! Remember that don’t turn back!” Chihiro said sadly and her face full of tears.

Slim, soft, smooth and pitch color hair, an innocent and beautiful face which gets rid of childish and became full of maturity. Yes, this is Chihiro. Ten years are such a long time since she separated with Nigihayami.

Chimiro walks gentlest on her way to the new book officially sign meeting. She always thinks that.

It’s already 10 years.

Since the last time I separated with you, it has been unconsciously past 10 years.

Chihiro has been from a slim, timidity little girl becomes the most famous Japanese fairy story writer.

This book is her third one and also can be considered as the latest one as well. The story she wrote is something about her childhood story. The one which happened in the fantasy world---the bathhouse 10 years ago.

This is spring now and extremely wet as the god from the heaven always crying. Chihiro leaned her head and watches the sky with a sunshine smiling.

This rainwater really looks like the wishes which Nigihayami sent from the other world.

Chihiro keeps walking and thinking until she arrives at her new book officially sign meeting. She puts her hand lightly on the chest.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, in what way make you write this famous fairy story?” asks by the new reporter who is holding the microphone and he puts the microphone in front of Chihiro.

“Because of a magical, beautiful and unforgettable real story in my childhood.” She answers slowly, and gentle with a charming smile.

“Ms Chihiro, would you like to cooperate with our神奈川 Film Company? We are really expected that make your book adapt into a fairy movie.” A very handsome man is getting into the crowed reporters and passing Chihiro his name card.

A short silence ensued, that handsome man looks quite like the one who is always in her memory, the one who deeply catches her heart.

“I will think about that. If you don’t mind, would you come with me for a coffee in the Kakashi coffee shop?” She asks.

“Wow that sounds nice, so see you around 8.” The man with a sweet smile and answered.

Chihiro stands in front of the Kakashi coffee shop when it is 8 o’clock.

This is her favourite coffee shop. Because in here always got something which cause her memories.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, what are you thinking now?” A gentle voice comes to her ears. That’s that man called Tomohisa

“Oh…I’m sorry, I didn’t recognized you are coming. Mr Tomohisa.” She answered and her beautiful face suddenly turns into red like an apple.

“so…mmm… Why we are still standing ourside the coffee? Let’s go into the shop and make ourselves comfortable. Ok?” Tomohisa said.

Chihiro laughed and walked into the shop.

“ To be honest, u r really stunning today with this beautiful evening dress.” Tomohisa stands at back of her and said.

And then she feels kind of breathless. Because that juvenile from 10 years before said the same words. She remembered that that’s such a beautiful sunshine morning nearby the garden, that juvenile said to her: “Chihiro, you look really beautiful when you are wearing the red dress.” And then, she smiles naturally to the juvenile. Just like this, she easily started to like his smiling. That juvenile, the one who is Worthing to put her whole life to.

“Excuse me, Ms Chihiro, I think you…” The voice from Tomohisa helps her get back from her sweet memories.

“I’m sorry.” Her face starts to turn red again and it’s the second time.

“I don’t want to talk about the movie things today, I don’t feel well.” She said. At this moment, she feels extremely cold, “So sorry about that date you out today. But I really don’t want to talk today.”

“ Ms Chihiro. It doesn’t matter…” Suddenly that, he stops talking.

He recognises that her beautiful face full of the tears.

She’s a so emotional girl , something just lightly touch her deep heart, and she would cry.

“I give you a lift to home.” He said extremely gentle and stares her eyes like the stars from the night sky.
“All right…” She answered and submissively followed him get into the car.

He parked the car in front of a daily shop.

“Ms Chihiro, you haven’t eaten anything tonight and must be hungry. I’m gonna buy you some food.” And then he gets out of the car and directly walk to the daily shop.

When he comes back, he recognises that Chihiro is gazing at him with gentle and innocent eyes.

“You are really looks like him, not only the appearance.”

He passed the bread to her and asked: “ You mean I look like whom?

“You look like the man inside my heart, quite similar.” She answered.

How similar is that! She starts to get down to her memories again.

“ So…Ms Chihiro, would you like to give me a chance, let me walk into your heart and repel your sorrow memories.” He gazes at her face with pure hearted eyes.

She suddenly getting frightened and mutter a few words and asked that: “why?’

“ Because you are such a special girl, when I first time I met you, I know that you are the one I should guard during my whole life.” Tomohisa said.

Standing at her backyard of her house, she’s gazing at Tomohisa’s car driving away. She feels extremely helpless and got nothing to do.

She feels so tired and cold. And then she takes a quick shower and goes to bed. But it’s really hard that she can’t go to sleep. She starts to think that she shouldn’t stand in the old memories any more. They are all passed away. The past memories only can cause her sorrow and sadness. The only one thing she should learn is to abandon and forgetting. She should live happily and enjoyable and Nigihayami from the other world should be happy to see that. Her new life has been started.

Her eyes suddenly getting so shining, she quickly check the clock, it’s 2 am in the morning, therefore, she straights out and open the cell phone and call Tomohisa. “Hi,it’s me…mmm… just wondering that would you like go out for a cup of coffee.” “ Yes, why not! I’m coming to pick you up! Please wait for me!”He Answered with extremely excited voice and quickly run out of the house.” She dressed her red evening dress again and looked at the mirror with a beautiful smile…


Black Jack Fanfiction

Black Jack and Pinoko live on the outskirts of a city. There are not many houses around their house. When they are having breakfast in a quiet morning, they receive a letter from a woman whose name is Naomi. The letter says “I would like you to see a person. He has a serious illness. Many doctors have tried to cure his illness, but nobody has cured. I heard about your reputation as a capable doctor, and I believe that only you can cure his illness. Please come and see him”. Black Jack and Pinoko have a foreboding that they are going to be involved in a trouble, yet they decide to see him.



Naomi and the person live in a village in the heart of the mountains. Black Jack and Pinoko go there by car. When they arrive there, they are surprised because their house is a mansion. They get out of the car and look around the house. There is a big garden and the grass is perfectly mowed. The exterior of the house is contemporary. They stop at the door and knock. A beautiful woman comes out and says “Hello. You’re Dr. Pinoko and Black Jack, aren’t you? Please come in”. Black Jack and Pinoko enter the house. The inside of the house is also gorgeous. Black Jack wonders why they live in such a location even though they definitely have enough money to live in the city, much more convenient place to live.
“Thank you for coming. My name is Naomi. I sent you the letter.”
“I’m Pinoko and he is Black Jack. Your house is very big. You’re the owner?”
“Uh…, yes…why don’t you have a seat, I’ll make you some tea.”
“No, thanks,” Black Jack suddenly says. “I want to see him. Where’s he?”
Pinoko does not want to work, so she looks at Black Jack with wistful eyes.
“Sure, follow me, please.” Naomi leads Black Jack and Pinoko to the basement.
They descend the stairs. It is dark and creepy. Pinoko wants to go home.

There is a door in the end of the stairs. “Here he is.” Naomi opens the door.
“This is him!?” Black Jack and Pinoko are frightened. They see a person who looks like a monster – all his skin festers, one of his eyelids sticks to his cheek’s skin, his nose is almost gone, he has no eyebrows and no eyelashes, and he cannot speak properly.
“Those are serious burned scars.” Black Jack says.
“He is my brother.” Naomi says. “He accidentally burned his entire body three years ago, and he became like this…”
“Has he seen a doctor?”
“Yes, but no doctor has been able to make him return to a normal condition. I heard you are the best doctor in the world, so…”
“It depends how much you can pay.” Pinoko says.
“How much will that be?”
“2.5 million dollars.” Pinoko says with a grin.
“Sure. I will deposit the money into your account.”
Naomi grabs her jacket and drives up to the bank.
Black Jack also grabs his white coat and says “Okay, Pinoko, let’s down to business.”
However, Pinoko does not want to operate on Ken, Naomi’s brother, because she is afraid of him.
“Well, I need to have a shower first, then I need to have a nap a little bit, and then…”
“Don’t be stupid! We’ll operate on him right now!” Black Jack shouts.
“Oookaaaaay…” Pinoko murmurs, but she grabs her white coat as well.
They make Ken lie down on the bed and start operating, looking at Ken’s ordinary face’s picture as a guide. Pinoko sometimes goes to the toilet to have a break during the operation.
“We will go home tonight. See you tomorrow morning.” After a long surgery, Black Jack says to Naomi and they leave her house.
“What do you think of them? I think they’re not normal brother and sister.” While Pinoko and Black Jack are driving home, Pinoko asks Black Jack.
“Yeah, there is a secret between them. He’s lost his tongue, so he can’t talk. He can’t hold a pen, so he can’t write either. No one can know inside of him.”
“What a pity.”
“The thing is, why she’s shut him into the basement for three years.”
“Strange family. I don’t want to go there again.” Pinoko tries to make a reason for quitting this operation.
“No, we’ll complete the operation no matter what happens!” Black Jack insists.
“Boo.”
I will post the rest of the story soon.
Please feel free to comment on this.

Sunday, October 12, 2008

Week 11

Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Detective Conan VS Tintin







Detective Conan is about an elementary school boy named Conan Edogawa. He solves mysteries and crimes through reasoning and logic and with the help of his friends and nifty gadgets. Conan is really a 17-year-old famous high school detective, Shinichi Kudo. While investigating some suspicious activity, Shinichi was knocked over the head by a man dressed in black. During his semi-conscious state, an experimental drug was forced down his throat that was meant to kill him. Instead, Shinichi was shrunk into a little kid. In order to prevent the men who did this to him from hurting his friends and family, Shinichi changed his name to Conan Edogawa and now lives with his girlfriend, Ran Mouri and her dad (Kogorou Mouri).
Tintin is a young Belgian reporter. He is aided in his adventures from the beginning by his faithful fox terrier dog named ‘snowy’, captain Haddock, Professor Calculus and bumbling detectives Thomson and Thompson.
Kogorou Mouri and Tintin had been contacted by the Japan National Police Agency that the Priminister Taro Aso has been kidnapped for quite sometimes but nobody had contacted the police. Kogorou knew that with his ability he may not be able to help Japanese Government so he asked Conan to be his assistant during the mission as Tintin also has a company(snowy). Who will solve the case first….the answer will be here in week 14.

Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Week 10